In denial

we think we are
the same we were
before,
still stuck
in love
but just not
together.

If we were
we would not
mind getting hurt
for each other
together,
But now
we don’t.

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2 thoughts on “In denial

  1. Good use of rhythm. I would take the ‘just’ out. It trivializes the power of the feeling with satire. It also messes up the rhythm, or did you purposely want a lurch disjunction there?

    Namaste, Ann

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